We presented our pitch on Wednesday the 5th of February and we got back loads of constructive criticism and feedback. We will be putting together the video of the feedback which we recorded and use that to help us make our story/film even stronger.
Positives about our pitch:
- Well structured
- Strong ideas
- Very realistic
- Quite different
- Focused on themes
- Had a clear plan
Improvements to be made:
- Talk about different ways of putting forward themes
- Have a more detailed description for filming days
- Make sure we keep to the story and make the opening clear
- Opening has to foreshadow the upcoming events for the rest of the film
Overall, we did excellently as a team and did our best to speak equally between us for the pitch. We know that we don't have a lot of time and need to make sure filming goes right the first attempt. This will save us time and give us a chance to be ahead on editing.
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